您需要注册并登录，才能查看贴子完整内容和图片。
您需要 登录 才可以下载或查看，没有帐号？立即注册
x
好的雅思写作开头可以为你的文章增色不少，但是如果你的雅思作文开头不仅不出色，而且还放下大错误，这样不仅会影响考官对你的印象，也会影响到你的雅思作文分数。
今天就跟大家分享的就是雅思写作错误开头的整理，希望对大家的复习有所帮助。
雅思写作失败开头1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’mvery interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college studentand I’m not married……
修改方案：开门见山直奔主题
In my opinion, it would not be awise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Willmodern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writingword as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
Ok, this topic is a very goodtopic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on theinternet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internetgames. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surelyvery important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
雅思写作失败开头二：中式英文人见人晕
典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there arealways some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem Thepopulation problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers ofShanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic 3- Is there fairness intoday’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in thebusiness world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
雅思写作失败开头三：观点模糊态度暧昧
典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? Ithink this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17,and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
相关阅读：
【看完这些，你的雅思写作到7不成问题】雅思强化写作精....
http://bbs.ourau.com/thread-6757-1-1.html
雅思写作：常见错误经典归纳总结（值得收藏！）
http://bbs.ourau.com/thread-19894-1-1.html
写作技巧：你能猜到这结尾吗
http://bbs.ourau.com/thread-19613-1-1.html
联系我时，请说是在天下皆知网站上看到的，谢谢！
|
置顶卡
变色卡
千斤顶
